How are you going to get better if you are satisfied with what you've got? And how can you be satisfied with that? Your journal is too shallow and the articles are too short, You didn't even explain why people were banned, so you don't even spread any gossip. The format itself is designed to be read by an 8 year old. How about you make a real newspaper that people can read while they are in jail and really bored? You have 29 members, so shouldn't it be possible for you to give people tasks and write at least 10 articles? Kick your journalists out if they're lazy. Also, I wasn't even able to read page 7 because the letters are way too small and you wasted an entire page on a picture saying "Lol section". Also, do you really need 3 different ways of publishing it? And a 10K prize for the quiz? That's pathetic when a regular CAMORRA event gives small prizes of 50K for winning a Destruction Derby round. How about making the quiz prize more like 1 million instead or even better, add much more questions to the quiz and make it difficult. You could also make it more of a lottery.Finally, you should be honored that your newspaper appears in the news section instead of pretending like it's nothing and that you don't care. In my opinion, that's just a childish defensive reaction to Arran's post.
@ MarouAneWell, that's a much more worthy answer and explanation than what Wilz was able to give, so thanks. I suggest that you handle public relations in the future. Anyway, I look forward to reading your next edition (perhaps more than anyone else because those lonely and boring times in jail between criminal events are .. well, lonely and boring.). It sounds like you've been working on it quite a lot, so good luck. I think we all want the CIT Journal to do well and I will certainly read anything that you guys publish (apart from small text comics) because I need glasses. Ps: You really should be able to give a much better prize. You guys are raking in big money with those costly advertisements. What are you spending your advertisement money on? Are you paying journalists or something?
Good job.Writers have to type a story with the news in it. You know: "FFH is L1". But now you know more information about it, and also NSM.
Any ways we know this...Some New stuffs will be enough.Also I advise to make interviews with some famous Players.as I said in the recent edition.But How ever I think that I must State Names.Kaka/Pan1k/Haftbefehl/Mixalis/Turismo/...Also what about to make a random pick up ?i mean as a Competition or an advertisment.maybe to earn some money ? you will make an interview with the one who offered most of money.EX : X Player: 100kY Player:200kF Player: 300k you will Make an interview with F player.I Hope that I helped you.Regards.