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'its' 'english'...
And who are you to judge someone's English? Aren't you a leader in the radio or something? So start acting as one
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I'd just like to show my appreciation for your efforts, 110 publications, so awesome, it's people like this that actually make CIT a community rather than just a server, respect.
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I'd just like to show my appreciation for your efforts, 110 publications, so awesome, it's people like this that actually make CIT a community rather than just a server, respect.
Was a big pleasure writing for this community.
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What did I do??  :joy:

people like this that actually make CIT a community rather than just a server

It's a good thing then we've got a good bunch of those people. I've always felt CIT was never "just a server", because of the people that actually bond and tie the players together  ;)
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looks good.

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I'd just like to show my appreciation for your efforts, 110 publications, so awesome, it's people like this that actually make CIT a community rather than just a server, respect.

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5 possible mistakes:

1st paragraph ----     My name is TOY-BOY 'I am' instead of 'am' an aux verb needs a pronoun.

1st paragraph ----     ...and I started playing as 'a' cop player instead of 'cop player'

                                 this sentence ' ...and I started playing as cop player then moved to law side' could be better as it has a repetition of the same
                                  meaning playing as a cop is the same thing that called law side so, it can be improved.

2nd paragraph ----        Back Days should be 'back in the days' as the days that you knew about and other CIT players knew about so it needs the
                                    article 'THE '


2nd paragraph ----   ...I didn't know I will be not addicted this sentence can be either I won't be addicted or I will  be not addicted I think both are correct so it's
                                not a mistake.


4th paragraph ---      ....if they made the gameplay worse bad...     worse is the comparative and bad is the adjective you could use the superlative worst.
                                      I am not sure about this.


 the last paragraph ---   .... cit should be written capitalized cause it's an acronym


there are other mistakes I couldn't check I am not sure if my suggestions are all correct but you might need to revise these mistakes to check.













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